Frank-Uselesschris's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Starfleet Uniform Pockets]

haha

=P nice, some of the bits were a little slow, like the shadow coming up, and how long it took eating him, but i guess would be kinda too short if ya cut things down, so T'was good ^.^

5/5

zebragrrl responds:

Glad you liked it.

Actually, I think the reason that people are feeling that the pacing is too long, is because I left out one fairly important lag spot. There's a couple of long lags in the ending, and none in the beginning, so it seems to be out of place.

I plan to fix that, as soon as I solve a music issue here. I plan to optimize the file a little bit, maybe address the issue of music and sound, and fix that error in timing.

Thanks for the feedback.

[Pepsi Commercial]

nice

that would make an excellent advert =P well done

[The Little Girl]

Wow

That was amazing ^.^ going in my Favs for sure, the thing that really made it ood was ur voice the way you read the story was perfect, made an excellent atmosphere

5/5

Frank

[Pallid Fingers]

nice

woulda given you a five but got that damn Error - it looks like you have already voted for this movie today something to do with someone having the same IP as me or something - This was great ^.^ an excellent flash with a salad fingers parody neatly weaved in.

Like salad fingers the simplisity and gap in dialogue added to it effectivness however spelt and freakyness, even the the Speakonia voice went well, t'was emotional and disturbing, who's the guy who inched the car =P?

but yeah anyway i'm not really making much sense so yeah great movie!

[Sonic Supreme Intro]

better

but i think you should've saved this for once the whole movie was complete and just put it all up at once, the simple drawings without all the radial fills looks much better ^.^ just practice drawing them a bit more as their a little rough, try experimenting with the smoothing button i find that a quick way of drawing neat images but not making it too complicated for FBF animation. if u want ur characters to look more 3D add some basic shading, take the colour of the bit your shading and darken it then just draw the shape of the shape with the pen, fill it in delete the pen and there you go ^.^. Nice movie, but practice and get it all done well and will be a great movie gd luck

Frank/Chris

[Spider-man animatics]

s'ok

needs sound!!! and colour and more detail and bg's ^.^ if you want i can help, if you do all the character animation in detail and colour, then send me the .fla file i'm make backgrounds and skies for it, my emails in my profile if ya want anyhelp reply to this before you do though else will end up in junk and i'll miss it

Frank

[I Just Want To Get A Nap]

haha!

thats excellent ^.^ haha love the song love the animation, is great *Favs* ^.^ great job

5/5
10/10

[My Tear for London]

Love the explosion effects...

As an animation, kinda simple and short, but decent for what 5-6 hours works, especially the explosions in the back ground, i relise tis just the a couple of images transform Horizontally and looped for a few seconds but is very effective, in flash simple is normally better, as it can be done to a much higher quality, take there she is, an amazing piece of work and one of the simpliest around, the rough drawing kinda seemed to show some of the chas that has been happening in london today, distorted violent and out of control, agains it's simpleness works wonders, i don't really think the music goes all that, the tune is a bit too cheery for this kinda out flash, the words fit however.

Now as a British Citizen- i know how you, feel i've been peeled to the new all day listening and watching, seeing people mulitlated and broken, people strandard scared and alone, what is it now 37 confirmed dead, and for what, what will stopping the underground in london for a day really accomplise, if people around the world have a problem with england then stay away it's simple enough, as to what others have said about us deserving it, they should really think more before putting stuff like that, most if not all people have done something bad in their lives, if not them then their families or ancestors, would you agree it's far to punish a child now for something his grandfather did say 60 years ago. England, the British empire may have done some pretty crappy things in the past but us today are not the same people, we should not be punished and killed for it, life is precious. i'll probably get moaned at for this review but i don't much care.

End terrorism stop killing just let everybody get on with their lives.

Nice flash gd work
3/5 for flash quality not the topic

[Fire VS Ice - 1]

s'not bad

but i think you shoulda really made this one longer instead of making two parts. this doesn't really seem to be enough to really be classed as one episode, sfx make a lot of difference so i think episode 2 with score alot higher, if could want i could make some bg for it, like moutains or clouds add me on msn if ya want any help, my emails on my Ng profile.

[Synergy]

excellent!

nice stick shorts brought to life by proper FBF animation :D a couple were kinda slow but most were excellent, especially liked sv3's colourfu; addition, great job to all of ya, hope to see more flashes of this high quality.

5/5
uselesschris