Frank-Uselesschris's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Starfleet Uniform Pockets]

haha

=P nice, some of the bits were a little slow, like the shadow coming up, and how long it took eating him, but i guess would be kinda too short if ya cut things down, so T'was good ^.^

5/5

zebragrrl responds:

Glad you liked it.

Actually, I think the reason that people are feeling that the pacing is too long, is because I left out one fairly important lag spot. There's a couple of long lags in the ending, and none in the beginning, so it seems to be out of place.

I plan to fix that, as soon as I solve a music issue here. I plan to optimize the file a little bit, maybe address the issue of music and sound, and fix that error in timing.

Thanks for the feedback.

[Pepsi Commercial]

nice

that would make an excellent advert =P well done

[The Little Girl]

Wow

That was amazing ^.^ going in my Favs for sure, the thing that really made it ood was ur voice the way you read the story was perfect, made an excellent atmosphere

5/5

Frank

[Pallid Fingers]

nice

woulda given you a five but got that damn Error - it looks like you have already voted for this movie today something to do with someone having the same IP as me or something - This was great ^.^ an excellent flash with a salad fingers parody neatly weaved in.

Like salad fingers the simplisity and gap in dialogue added to it effectivness however spelt and freakyness, even the the Speakonia voice went well, t'was emotional and disturbing, who's the guy who inched the car =P?

but yeah anyway i'm not really making much sense so yeah great movie!

[Sonic Supreme Intro]

better

but i think you should've saved this for once the whole movie was complete and just put it all up at once, the simple drawings without all the radial fills looks much better ^.^ just practice drawing them a bit more as their a little rough, try experimenting with the smoothing button i find that a quick way of drawing neat images but not making it too complicated for FBF animation. if u want ur characters to look more 3D add some basic shading, take the colour of the bit your shading and darken it then just draw the shape of the shape with the pen, fill it in delete the pen and there you go ^.^. Nice movie, but practice and get it all done well and will be a great movie gd luck

Frank/Chris

[Spider-man animatics]

s'ok

needs sound!!! and colour and more detail and bg's ^.^ if you want i can help, if you do all the character animation in detail and colour, then send me the .fla file i'm make backgrounds and skies for it, my emails in my profile if ya want anyhelp reply to this before you do though else will end up in junk and i'll miss it

Frank

[I Just Want To Get A Nap]

haha!

thats excellent ^.^ haha love the song love the animation, is great *Favs* ^.^ great job

5/5
10/10

[Fire VS Ice - 1]

s'not bad

but i think you shoulda really made this one longer instead of making two parts. this doesn't really seem to be enough to really be classed as one episode, sfx make a lot of difference so i think episode 2 with score alot higher, if could want i could make some bg for it, like moutains or clouds add me on msn if ya want any help, my emails on my Ng profile.

[Synergy]

excellent!

nice stick shorts brought to life by proper FBF animation :D a couple were kinda slow but most were excellent, especially liked sv3's colourfu; addition, great job to all of ya, hope to see more flashes of this high quality.

5/5
uselesschris